#4 - Show What You Mean
A Savory Poem
- To Woo Women
- Robin Williams in Dead Poets' Society: The purpose of poetry is to woo women
- Poet = sensitive & expressive
- Women find this attractive?
- Bread used to woo women.
- Baker of warm, hearty loafs = warm & solid
- Others unravel that mystery
- Bread is still closer to poetry
- Takes inspiration
- Poet is inspired by experiences
- Desire to express feelings towards someone else
- When I bake bread, it's often for a dinner party
- Or when the weather is cold & I want to be warm inside
- It's crafting is a labor of love
- Poet chooses words carefully
- Find right ones
- Not too many, not too few
- The words are just so
- Remove some, and poem fails
- A baker chooses best ingredients
- Too many overwhelms the palate, and are distasteful
- Too few, bread is incomplete
- Flour, yeast are necessary; if removed, bread fails.
- Wordsmith knows many words and meanings
- Chooses the best for a poem
- The flavorsmith understands ingredients and seasonings
- Selects to make perfect loaf
- Poet labors over his words
- Writing, erasing
- Staring, reading, walking away, and returning
- Perhaps reading it to a friend, and gaining their response
- Baker's labor is similar
- Culinary words are: flour, sugar, molasses, yeast, milk, and heat
- Measuring, mixing, kneading, rolling, and baking
- Friend's response valuable in appraising the result
- Final results is pleasing to the senses
- A poem is not meant to be silently examined
- It should be read aloud
- Mouth savors the words & relishes their texture as pronounced
- Ears capture the sounds, and meanings
- Nor is Bread just admired
- Hands feel the texture & measure the weight of the slice
- Nose capictures the aroma
- Mouth savors the flavor, and texture
- Light, airy feel of a white bread
- Dense dark flavor of some wheat breads
- Eat bread
- Next time you have good bread
- Not plain loaf bread = "Roses are red, violets are blue"
- Quality bread
- Savor the culinary poetry
- As for me
- Looking forward to cold weather
- Inspiration to bake
- Perhaps I'll invite a female friend and woo her